poems revision } an april eye rewrite this time
Here’s a bit what I’m working on. I’ve revised this one, but don’t yet understand the revision. 
I’m working on compiling a private collection for special friends, so I assume that it has something to do with what’s brewing in my head.
From an August’s return
Maybe it’s better if we continued this conversation
Not at all. You say your name is…and
I already knew you. Before, I remember
Flower, delicate magnolia roughsnatched
highjumped branched—that would be
Me. Pretensive then and again. 5AM,
IM-ing off this hook-up site—no less than
ever we were. As always attempting
to complete this puzzle. Or does ego yet
force your fit of me off myself? Either
Or no matter how long I survive
My lives of you…of you and me—of
myself every year pacing sunset to
Sidewalk. And always
The buzzing cicadas recall every
Summer’s end.
August 21, 2010 – April 13, 2012
My favorite Neurda Poems…a facebook question
A great and talented friend asked me what my 3 favorite Neurda poems are. The question comes as a paradox for me, it is a hard one, but an easy one. So first here’s my list: “If You Forget Me,” “Nothing But Death,” and “Ode To The Artichoke.” It was hard to chose the poems from Neurda I like since there are so many, so I chose two that had emotional connection to my life. But one of them was a no brainier…it was an easy pick.
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